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Lunch Table Drama I was about eight years old It was a hot summer day My friend Danny aka El gorditaand I were on our way to the park We were holding in our hands our colorful lunch pails full of sweetsWe were two chubby boys on our way to do something that we do best that is eating We walked over to our favorite table it was right next to the tier wheel We just began to open our lunch pails when two huge shadows were blocking the sun We were frightened by there mere shadows I looked at Danny and Danny looked at me we look at each other hoping that just there shadows were bigThey walked closer and looked at us and said What do you got their fat boys with a stutter I said just just some sweets With what I thought was a flash of lightning they took my star bright lunch pail and dumped all my sweets on the floor The other boy laughed and then he stepped on my cup cake I stood there watching the delicious cream filling flow out of the chocolaty delight cup cake I fell to my knees and started to cry Danny looked at what happened and said dont worry Chubs Ill get help Then he ran off leaving his Conan lunch pail still on the lunch tableWhile Danny was gone the two teenage kids ripped the tire right off the ropes The two boys rolled the tire over to me and told me to get in I shouted out no Im not Then the two boys picked me up and forced me into the small round tire They started to roll the tire down the hillAbout half way down the hill I lost gravity and my chubby butt fell out And in my luck I slammed into a mud
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