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The Pain of War One day a young man named Jack woke up He was a mere boy of only 16 All he heard was the voice of his mother screaming Theres a war outside theres a war outside she screamed He jumped out of bed as quickly as he could He said mother dont worry Im going save our country and fight for the freedom of our land He had a shower got dressed and left in a taxi with his things to go to the local army base He got there and was surrounded by other young men most no more than two years his senior He thought to him self wow this is amazing I could die But he passed the thought he picked him self up and told himself one thing I have the power to create a better life I could create freedom for the next generation I could help peoples children live a free life and that was all he needed His thoughts were immediately cleared suddenly he was focused on the task at hand He was sure of his purpose He marched into the colonels office and said Hello I am here for assignment The colonel was astounded despite seeing hundreds of men that same day saying close to the same thing as Jack had he couldnt help noticing something different about Jack it might have been something in the tone of his voice or the determined look in his eye but whatever it was it nearly knocked the colonel off his feet there was something special about that boy Here are your papers go and fill them out As Jack left the office the colonel thought to himself that boy is going to make a great soldier Later that day Jack met up with all the other soldiers It was in the mess hall they had all been called there for
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