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In my life some things have really stunk I felt like a total punkWhen hope was out of sight I had a brother who stepped in to fightI could be in the dumps really canned he would always lend a helping handHe could be really close or not I could still call him on the spotNot only was he there for the bad days but for the good ones alwaysI cant say weve always been on the same track but my brothers always got my backI could be in any sort of jam some as thick as tar still he would never be that farWe used to fight all the time when we were young then well then I pierced my tongueThats when he went away hes never even come back for like a dayIts okay now I dont mind because my brother I can always findI love him more then a lot things and its not only because were siblingsWhere ever he is I still see his face hes my one and only brother I love you AceBibliographyPersonal EssayMy name is Annie Chapman and I am sixteen years old I started my life in 1983 in Los Angeles actually in a suburb called Culver City From the hospital I moved into a house on Lucerne Ave with my father Alan Berftman my mother Mary Lee Chapman and my older brother by four years Ace I spent just short of ten years in that same house While I lived in Culver City I attended a Spanish emersion elementary school called El Rinclon There I learned to speak Spanish as a second languageA month before my tenth birthday my parents decided to move to the small town of Little Stone They took ownership of an old hotel called the Winnemucckah So into the Winnemucckah we moved I began third grade at the local school called Oten Valley after Christmas break After living in the big city
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