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The Continued Debate about Private Versus Public Education

This essay analyzes the debate of using private school vouchers to improve the quality of public education. The student focuses on several key issues, including the importance of public schools in a democracy, the misrepresentation of failing public schools since the 1980s, and public schools in relation to economic interests.
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Emily's feedback:

"This essay is overall very informative and has a lot of good, detailed information in it. Some of your language is a little convoluted though; there are many cases where simpler language or shorter phrases and/or sentences fit better and make your point clearer. Sometimes an argument can get lost in wordy language, and it becomes difficult to focus on the topic. Your introduction could also benefit from a little more information added to it. For example, explaining what a private school voucher is, or why using those vouchers is a marketplace strategy, can provide some details that readers may need to get a better grasp on the topic. There are some instances where information is not cited but seems like it needs to be, or quotes that you use need page numbers from their sources. Follow the formatting for your specific style guide to make sure everything is properly cited."

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