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The rash of violent crimes in recent months seems to be on the rise More teens than ever are becoming the culprits Although more and more teens are the culprits they are also three times as likely to become the victims People ask why do young adults commit these crimes The answer is very complicated Teenagers act violently for a number of reasons or a combination lots of reasons The main and most important reason is due to poor mental health The recent school shootings young deaths could have been prevented If these young teens were thought ways to improve there mental health Teens in this Health class are being taught just that way to improve their mental health Taking this class is possibly preventing young teens in the school to commit violent crimes If you havent been in a coma you must have heard of the Columbine shootings on April 20 1999 A couple students from Columbine high school came to school with guns and bombs and killed twelve students and a teacher injuring two dozen then killing themselves Students and News analysts said these 2 boys were into hate crimes and discrimination They say they found lots of stuff on the internet about hate crimes and how to make weapons such as bombs they targeted certain groups such as jocks blacks jews and people that bullied them Also just last week another school shooting erupted in San Diego California There a 15-year old freshmen brought a firearm to school in his backpack and shot at students and faculty almost at random in a fit of rage He killed two students in the bathroom after he targeted them because they had been picking on him After shooting one in the back of the head he stood in the doorway of the bathroom and fired at people running by People can get confused about where to put the
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