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Comparing Religion in Everyday Life in Ancient Rome and Today

This essay on Roman religion identifies parallels between Mithraism and Christianity to move into a comparison between the decline of spiritual life in Rome and the modern Christian West.
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Bridget's feedback:

"You bring up a number of good points, and the historical discussion shows control over the details of the topic. The essay's purpose becomes hard to determine as the paragraphs progress. An essay can be wide-ranging and exploratory as long as the control over the structure, organization, and signposting is maintained: to start, consider crafting an introductory paragraph that asserts the various moving parts of your project, including a heads-up for the reader that the discussion will take a personal opinion-based turn.

In this current draft, the final paragraph is rather enigmatic; again, this might be clarified via an introduction, but there will probably be other opportunities closer to the end to move more purposefully into this final point. Work a little further with paragraphing to help organize the first long paragraph, as well, keeping in mind readability and structure."

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