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Scared The sun was beating down on my friends and I as we played army in the fields behind our houses filled with wild grass and weeds As we played in the hot afternoon my stomach would turn as if I was about to get in a fight at school This could only mean one thing it was almost time for dad to get home Many things ran through my head as I lost my breath Did I do everything that was on the chore list Did I get in trouble at school today I was thinking of anything that I might have done earlier that day to upset my father My father is a good man and I love him very much We had the closest father-son relationship you could get If Dad was outside in the garage working on his lifted maroon Ford I was right there working with him If my dad was going to the store for hamburger meat before dinner I went with him I went everywhere and did everything I could with my dad He was my hero he was invincible like a comic book character My father had one downfall though he liked to drink I mean my dad drank all the time Seven days a week My dad was a construction worker and every day after work he and his fellow workers had bud thirty This was actually 530 pm the end of the workday for them They would either send someone to the liquor store to buy beer or they would all go out to a bar and drink They would not just have a few beers but have enough to get hammered How he drove home every night who knows You see my dad was not a happy drunk He was a very angry drunk He was very aggressive and wanted to fight when he drank This is why my stomach
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