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The sun began to rise illuminating the cobbled street in a warm red glow The small village was gradually awakening the sun stretching out warm fingers then warm arms arousing shops and houses as it enveloped the village in its glowing embrace The small shops began to come alive exotic smells floating down the street hints of warm oriental spice from the marked emerged bordered by a hint of a salty odour emanating from the boardwalk fish n chips store The aromatic perfume of an open flower shop wafted through the streets men rushing to buy the freshly cut bouquets for forgotten anniversaries A beautiful summer Sunday morning was beginning In the fifth house down Rosewood Avenue a girl was waking up She climbed out of bed and slipped on her dressing gown then padded silently downstairs in her bare feet She went into the lounge and was bewildered to find her mother sitting on the floor in the middle of the room tears streaming down her face Chacity ran over to her mum and put her hands on her shoulders turning the sobbing woman to face herMum Mum Whats wrong Wheres Daddy and Jamie Mum Answer me mum she said urgently Her mum continued to sob heart brokenly and shook her head sadlyTheyve gone Chacity Remember when you asked me a few weeks ago if Daddy and I still loved each other Well sometimes even though you love each other you just cant live with each otherChacity didnt wait to hear the end A high pitched sob echoed round the room then she turned and ran out of the room upstairs to her bedroom and slammed the door She sank down onto her bed and pulled her favourite teddy close She didnt care if it was babyish for a twelve-year-old to have a teddy She wasnt sure what she cared about anymore It was like her whole world had just ended in a split
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