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Jack let the last note of the song he was singing ring through the air The D was way toflat he thought to himself It must be perfect I can accept no less He started the songover again The last note remained flat His face began to darken in color He tried againThe results were no difference He began to feel his temper try to take over Calmyourself he spoke silently to his mind Dont let them see your frustration Stay true toyour British nature Be cool calm collected So he tried again never settling for anythingThat night at dinner Jacks mom served the usual green leafy meal she alwaysdid Jack had been a vegetarian his whole life Not by his own choice but his mothersWhen at a friends house the night before he starred longingly at the juicy beef beforehim How he wanted to sink his teeth into that meat He held in this urge the best hecould Never let them see you weak That was his mottoJack sat by the crackling fire with his family Tomorrow he would return to prepschool His family was enjoying their last night with everyone together Jack satin-between his brother Garret and his sister Ellis Jack struggled to keep quiet Hisparents always taught him to be seen and not heard He noticed his siblings were doingthe same His dad was telling his mother a story about work that day He described theloud barbarian ways a foreigner had acted in the middle of an England road Jack held hisanger when hearing this This man was disgracing England He should have been taughtbetter manners Jack thought He should have always strived for perfection He shouldhave been raised a vegetarian He should have learned to be seen and not heard Jackbegan tapping rapidly upon the floor His mother frowned on him but he couldnt bringJack left for prep school that morning For a second he couldnt find his chorusbook A sudden
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