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Enl 102 Rough draft Oleanna The ending of Oleanna could have been prevented I t didnt have to end with John loosing control The story is based on miscommunication Carol could have told John from the beginning that she felt uncomfortable instead of going behind his back and press charges John is wrong too for abusing the power he had over Carol John didnt loose it though until he found out Carol might be charging him with rape We all know that he didnt try raping her so if the government redefined rape Johns out burst would have never happened All of the above could have prevented the ending of Oleanna Carol went to Johns office to tell him that she couldnt afford to fail and that she has tried everything to try to understand but she still cant John understands her problem and offers to give her an A for the term if she stops by his office more often and talk about what she doesnt understand Carol asks why would you do this for me and he replies because I like you Carol doesnt understand why he likes her and John tells her that he believes that perhaps were similar Carol makes no suggestion of her feeling sexually harassed and that is when the problem begins Carol sat there and listened to what John had to say Most people when they feel uncomfortable they leave Carol even made notes of words that made her feel sexually harassed such as He told me he had problems with his wife and that he wanted to take off the artificial stricture of Teacher and Student He put his arms around me Carol did this out of anger John only mentioned problems with his wife after Carol asked him and he put his arm on her shoulder It was nonsexual She pressed charges because she was angry with John for abusing his power as a
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