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The story starts off with Gary Lutz sitting under his big oak tree in his back yard reading his comic books Then Garys pain in the butt neighbor Mr Andretti keeps scaring Gary by telling Gary that Mr Andrettis beehive has gone crazy Gary falls for it every time because Gary is afraid of bees All day Gary reads his comic books because he hates to do anything else No one likes Gary because they think hes a nerd because he stinks at sports and looks weird For instance one time Gary was lined up to play baseball with the other students and was last in line and at the end of the game they lost because he struck out So one of the big kids came up to him and punched him in the nose so Gary ended up having to go home with a bloody nose The next day Gary found an ad while surfing on the web It said in big bold letters Body Swapping Switch Bodies With Someone Else for One Whole Week Gary liked that idea because he needed a long vacation from himself He decided that he would go to the body-swapping place the next day since it was only few blocks away What a coincidence The next day Gary went to the company and asked if he could switch bodies with someone else The lady at the front desk named Ms Karmen gave a picture to Gary and asked if he wanted to switch bodies with boy his age named Barry Gary said he would because this guy was really cool looking Ms Karmen said she would come to his house the next dayThe next day Ms Karmen showed up on time and set up the equipment She started the machine Then something went wrong Gary turned into a bee Ms Karmen didnt know what happened to Gary so she took her equipment and left Gary
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