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Dochyel stood very stiffly at the bottom of the old stairs that lead up to the attic He held a large serving spoon that was stained with spaghetti in his right hand In his left hand he firmly held one of his mothers cast iron lids to her frying pan On his head he sported a metal spaghetti strainer He was prepared to face anything that was up there He looked up the chipped stairs but just by the look of them he didnt want to go up because they were old and cracked and he was afraid the stairs would eat him before he reached the top He stepped on the first step it squeaked under his pressure as did all the other steps His foot made a small thud as he continued up the stairs He gripped his spoon and lid tighter until he could see the whites of his knuckles and his palms began to sweat He knew he had no business being up there but he could swear something lived in his attic When Dochyel was asleep he could hear faint voices coming from his attic The claws of a ferocious beast would scrap across the ceiling above his head He knew something lived up there He would listen to the voices and they would say to him let us out please help us He would lie in bed and cry because he knew that those people were being eaten alive by that horrible creature in his attic It was up to him now to save those people He stood in front of the large oak door which separated him and the monster He could smell the beasts odor through the door He started to sweat as he turned the brass textured doorknob The door opened with a long excruciating squeak that he was sure woke up the carnivorous animal The room was filled with boxes packed with clothes stuffed
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