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The passages given from the Edwards Sinners in the Hands of an Angry God and the opening sentence of the Declaration both include many points such as the tone diction and syntax The points shown throughout each sentence aims for the intent of obtaining the attention of the audience The way each sentence is arranged with its own syntax can very well appeal to listeners depending on its structure and imagery Within the given sentence excerpt from Edwards Sinners in the Hand of an Angry God you may perceive that the speaker is undoubtedly reaching for the audiences attention without sustaining his harsh yet fearful manner Throughout this controlled harsh tone of voice he captivates the audience through a deep sense of threat or harm Within this deep threatening and captivating speech the speaker uses God as the higher power in order to obtain the audiences attention to grasp each persons emotions and fill them with fear The speaker uses fear to complete the assurance of the people to do his intentions Although the Edwards excerpt sentence involved fear emotional deception and mental deception to obtain the audiences full attention the opening sentence of Jeffersons Declaration gives the audience a much different approach to procure the audiences focus Jeffersons opening sentence has a mild tone of diction for the beginning of an informative speech The eloquent words highly imposed among the speech when dictated create a powerful sentence that attracts the attention of the audience with curiosity in what the speaker has to say Thus intriguing the people informing them with important knowledge that needs to be said The opening sentence in the Declaration as compared with the Edwards sentence shows the different styles of syntax Syntax in which the speaker intentionally uses threats to force the audience to listen to or do the speakers intentions and directions as shown in the Edwards excerpt A totally different approach is used in the opening sentence of
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