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Bridget's feedback:
"This is a good start demonstrating your engagement with the text, its ideas, and its characters. (Check your claim that the setting is medieval, para. 2, though.) I appreciate your discussion about entertainment and the human need for it; less clear is why being "simple" is a "major problem" (para. 4)--can you expand on what makes this a problem?
The organization and structure of this draft is a little hard to follow at times. Each paragraph on its own shows solid internal logic and structure, but the movement at the macro level is rather abrupt and doesn't present a clear purpose; for example, after the paragraph on "the major problem" (discussed above), you cover Fielding's biography and then move into a definition of the theme. The plot and characters are then presented in outline/list form. Will these elements be woven into the essay at a later point? As you move forward, consider what order the ideas and paragraphs are presented in, and how this can help the reader understand this project as a whole."
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Kibin. (2024). Why fielding's tom jones still entertains readers today. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/why-fieldings-tom-jones-still-entertains-readers-today-NYHaHjqf
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("Why Fielding's Tom Jones Still Entertains Readers Today.")
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