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Thats so cool I exclaimed In my hand was a Valentines Day card which folded to make a spaceship I was in a Hallmark card shop with my father looking at cards for the upcoming holiday If I got you that card now then it wouldnt be a surprise later my father logically stated But its neat See it folds into a spaceship Ill get it for you but just act surprised for your mother when you open the card Okay dad I answered as we walked up to the counter My father paid for the card and we left the store It was a week before Valentines Day in 1987 I was nine years old and intensely anxious Expectation for February 14 had overcome every other thought I previously had It might seem funny to some that I held that one day with such great esteem but to me it was unlike any other holiday On Valentines Day I felt loved by everyone On that day I would obtain the card that I had picked out from my father Classmates would give everyone Valentine cards Some extremely generous kids would even attach candy to the cards It didnt matter if you hated each other on Valentines Day everyone put aside their differences and even presented cards to the children nobody liked That one day of love seemed to unify the worst of foes through love and forgiveness I could hardly wait for that day to come As the night before Valentines Day had rolled around anticipation had escalated to an all time peak Nevertheless it was all set aside as my parents once again started to fight My brother and I were sent to the car in the garage so that we would not witness them fighting We knew the routine I
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