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The drinking age is fine if anything is should get raised It is hard to ignore the fact that this law is broken everyday Its the 90s all teens just want to fit in Kids are drinking at a much younger age Now even 10 year olds and 11 year olds are trying to fit in with us older kids Its amazing and sometimes funny what kids will do just to fit in with the good crowd Well to some of us thats considered the druggies and drinkers Our parents call them the bad crowd with good reason I speak from experience Now I agree with the parents out there who worry about their kids getting into the same kind of troubles as I was in at one point in my life Im going to cut straight to the facts Heres what parties today look like for teens The setting a beach or a house with no adults around to say whats wrong The people are a bunch of teens of both sexes The environment is any kind of drugs and or alcohol These consists of hard liquor like Vodka and Jack Daniels Then there is beer with the lighter stuff like wine wine coolers and fuzzy navel Teens that drive are in big trouble and are at big risk Im not blaming the accidents that involve drunk in just teens Drunk drivers are of all ages And Im not trying to say that all teens drink either But the ones that do and are stupid enough to say theyre sober and can drive home safe Those are the ones that put innocent citizens at risk The drunk teens that drive are looking at getting their license provoked They go to jail their car gets impounded and of course they get a DUI At parties where teens get drunk they can easily forget stuff A lot of times thats where teens get
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