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1How it all began About two years ago a creature came into my and my familys life and with her she has brought great joy and on occasion deep sorrow not for what she has done but for what she is You see fate has delivered her to this world in the form of a sweet tan and white dog but has also delivered her a cruel blow by making her a Pit Bull Terrier Her name is Tina and although she was not my first choice in a family pet I can think now of no other who would be such a family friend to us 2The exhausting search My search for a dog began shortly after we moved into our new home here in New York My husband and I were searching for a Labrador retriever to no avail one evening on an animal rescue website when a pitiful white dog caught my eye as I read her story of abuse and torture that to most of us is unimaginable we wept I immediately composed an email to the rescue agent asking to adopt the dog and waited with hope for a quick response The return email did come the next day along with the rescue agents phone number which I promptly called 3The long journey begins Our adoption had been accepted the voice on the other end of the line told me and plans for her arrival where made with great anticipation Unfortunately the white dog was not to be The foster home had decided to keep her at the last minute and I was devastated Then as if it had been decided by a greater force mysterious to any of us the rescue agent spoke to me of a dog she had been taking care of since she was a small puppy found abandoned and starved in a burning building by an angel in a firemans form She was
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