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Picasso's Les Demoiselles d'Avignon and the Birth of Cubism

This art history essay on the birth of Cubism includes the student's personal reflection and reaction to Picasso's philosophy of painting. The essay includes an analysis of Les Demoiselles d'Avignon.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bridget's feedback:

"You write about art fluently, and this makes for a very engaging paper. I have a few suggestions to refine the presentation and take this response to the next level. I encountered occasional awkward or unclear phrasing; while they were not outright errors, because they impede clarity, I would suggest a specific round of proofreading for clarity and flow. In my copy of your paper, the image breaks up the text and makes it very hard to navigate the writing on the second page--when using images, keep in mind formatting and reader experience.

In terms of organization and argumentation, I would suggest giving your final discussion about your personal reaction its own paragraph. This is the moment you really show your reader your mastery of the topic via that personal engagement, and if you have room, I would suggest expanding this discussion--get deeper into your agreement and disagreement with Picasso's philosophy. Second, though Braque is introduced in the introduction, he doesn't end up figuring into the body discussion. If he is a secondary figure here in your overall discussion and approach, make this clear in how he is integrated into the paper. Otherwise, the reader will be waiting for more on Braque."

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