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Kibin. (2024). How my reading habits changed in high school. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-my-reading-habits-changed-in-high-school-o5qRJQwE
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Bridget's feedback:
"You've brought together a good array of rhetorical choices in this essay, taking advantage of personal tone, voice, and ethos to create a connection with your reader. I do spot a number of awkward diction or phrasing that makes the reading experience a little bumpy, so I think your main task as you move forward will be to proofread and revise to ensure clarity. For example, "take a break then start over again" suggests you re-read the chapter -- this can be fixed up by deleting "over" and just using "start again" or "start reading again"; I give this example to show that this task will be as much about style and meaning as it will entail catching mechanical errors, so I recommend an approach with a holistic sense of clarity and communication with the reader.
The final sentence seems to open up a new discussion rather than bring things to a close. The reader will be interested in that last claim; consider giving it more breathing room by staying in that critique of college reading assignments for one or two more sentences before crafting a concluding sentence."
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Reference list entry:
Kibin. (2024). How my reading habits changed in high school. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-my-reading-habits-changed-in-high-school-o5qRJQwE
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("How My Reading Habits Changed in High School.")
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"How My Reading Habits Changed in High School." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-my-reading-habits-changed-in-high-school-o5qRJQwE
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1. "How My Reading Habits Changed in High School." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-my-reading-habits-changed-in-high-school-o5qRJQwE.
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"How My Reading Habits Changed in High School." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/how-my-reading-habits-changed-in-high-school-o5qRJQwE.
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