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Richard Bach once said You are never given a dream without also being given the power to make it true As a transfer student I am about to embark on a new path and take another step in my academic journey It is my goal to make every one of my dreams realities and I believe that the University of Rhode Island is a step in the right direction My journey began as a completely oblivious high school student Unaware of what college would bring I decided to stay local and chose to attend the University of Massachusetts at Amherst I found classes very challenging yet rewarding and as I achieved a GPA of 33 during the first semester I strove to improve and longed to move up the ladder of success until I reached the top Receiving a GPA of 38 my second semester I came to appreciate academic stimulation I had overcome the obstacle of change and found my place in the community of UMass I thought for sure that UMass was the place for me and I could not wait to embark on my second year and finally move up the ladder of rankings and no longer be a little freshman As I registered for classes for my second year I was excited and nervous about what the year ahead would bring I had met so many wonderful people I had an on-campus job that I loved and I found the classes very rewarding I pre-registered for six classes and was thoroughly disappointed to find that I had only been placed in two of them since the other four courses were oversubscribed As a student who had pushed myself and looked forward to more challenges it was quite a disappointment to receive such news but I was not going to let that stop me I called around to see what could be done and found very little support and no alternatives for
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