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English 4 Mrs Simmons Throughout my life I have usually been on the receiving end of racist comments In eighth grade I had to go to a public school because of moving reasons and that is where the comments started I could honestly say that it was the worst experience in my life Their were only two oriental kids in my class I was one of them The other kid was also Korean but the catch there was that he was a well known football player I also played football but I wasnt the all-pro quarter back Since he was so good and so well know no one ever said a word to him The first day at Richlandthe name of the school which I went to everyone was nice to me The first couple days were great Everyone was so friendly and willing to accept me Going into the second week I met this girl Amber she was beautiful I was sitting at the lunch table one day and she walked by and I commented on how hot she was One kid who I thought was my friend said Since you are new here I will let that go I responded What do you mean Chad said I like Amber also and whoever I like no one tries stepping in do you understand Whatever dude I said Chad said Now Page 2 listen I like you and it is better off that way So naturally I did what I wanted to do I asked Amber for her number That weekend Amber and I went out on a date I sure did have a good time That following Monday Chad heard about the date and flipped out Just after
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