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The Rise of the Women’s Suffrage Movement

This essay traces the beginnings of the women's suffrage movement, which grew from the success of the abolitionist movement.
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Jim's feedback:

"You should avoid informal terms such as “nowadays,” as well as contractions. Consider word choices, such as the “aptitude” to vote; please check that definition. Your second paragraph starts with a comma splice, which is the use of a comma to separate what are two sentences. You place a semicolon before a list of names, and you write “a group of know.” You should not capitalize common nouns, and this would include “abolitionist” and “suffragist.” As a matter of style, you end a sentence with “Seneca Falls Convention,” and you start the next sentence with these same words. You should be able to rewrite these two sentences so as to avoid that repetition. You provide good information in this essay. You need to improve your grammar to match the quality of the information. Make a habit of running a grammar check. This will identify many errors."

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