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Miles and miles of forbidding coastline stretched ahead as we reflected back on the lives we just abandoned I knew we always talked about this but I am scared now that it is truly happening Maybe it was a rash decision or too soon I could not turn off my thoughts It was as if my thoughts were racing in the Olympics through my mind All I saw were fast flashes of never-ending terror I held my breath I grasped my seatbelt so tight I lost feeling in my fingers and my palms started to sweat Before I knew it I was sweating all over and turning purple because I refused to exhale I knew when I did I would not be able to hold it in any longer Stop I yelled The momentum of the car breaks threw me out of the back seat The feeling of oxygen entering my throat down to my lungs and back out was beyond satisfaction but I had not even noticed the word I uttered as I exhaled Trace the driver slammed his hands on the steering wheel looked back at me and said What is your problem I did not know where to start What is my problem I thought Maybe the part where I have nothing but heartache left and that I am in a car with a stranger taking me nowhere I sat there and finally stuttered I do not think this is a good idea It is what we want Trust me You do not want to go back to that abusive life of yours do you Sierra said Sierra is my best friend and I trust her with my life No I mumbled regretting it as the world slithered out of my mouth Trace began to drive again My thoughts started also It was race two and they were running through my mind as fast and hard as they could I closed my
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