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I dont have it that bad My sophomore year of High School I played basketball One night we were playing against Orland and the game was almost over We were only a couple points behind I was trying my best to play the best game I ever played When I went to go get the ball I tripped over a teammate and I fell A sharp pain shot through my knee Thats when everything changed for me Since that day I have had two surgeries on my right knee I had my last one in July so it was pretty recent Since that incident I look at everything differently There are so many things that I cannot do right now and it has been this way for about one year and a half I cant go outside with my friends and play a simple game of basketball or just about any sport I have to be careful in places that are slippery because if I slip theres a chance that I might re injure my knee When I would go to school I use to be careless about how I walked I always had people bumping into me and almost making me fall and vice versa Now I am constantly aware of my surroundings I make sure that no one is going to trip over my leg and hurt me When Im watching television and I see people playing sports I think to myself Im never going to be able to play a sport with out having any problems I start saying why did this have to happen to me I get so angry that I breakdown and cry I also ask myself the What ifs What if I never would have gone for the ball that night How would I be right now Would I have been playing basketball still Or another sport I cant even remember how I use
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