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Bob's feedback:
"Your enthusiasm for this movie comes through clearly and you address the different aspects of the film that make it come together so well. The biggest issue with the paper is organization. The essay feels like it follows your stream of consciousness rather than a planned-out order. Consider making an outline to assign different topics to each paragraph.
Your introduction could use some work as well. While the idea that the music alone makes the movie great is a solid point, opening with it can make your reader think that the essay is mainly about the soundtrack. The essay lacks a solid and separate conclusion as well."
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Kibin. (2024). An enthusiastic review of the film, the commitments. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/an-introduction-and-an-analysis-of-the-music-by-the-commitments-RsfAQEcK
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("An Enthusiastic Review of the Film, The Commitments.")
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