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Kibin. (2024). Pokémon comes to america: parenting in the late 1990s. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/pokmon-comes-to-america-parenting-in-the-late-1990s-8e5BgxpA
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Bridget's feedback:
"I really enjoyed reading this essay, especially as a snapshot of when Pokemon first landed in America. If you continue working with this piece, I recommend updating the discussion to create the longer narrative (both in terms of the fad and in terms of the parenting aspect) or establishing a "looking backward" or "moment in time" purpose in discussing the phenomenon.
You explore a number of threads in an efficient and clear way, so most of my comments would be regarding lower-order concerns. These would include proofreading to catch mechanics issues (punctuation errors, misspellings), properly placing all quotation marks to clearly mark out direct quotes, and helping the reader follow your research path via in-text citations or signal phrases (the latter of which are used well but should be adjusted as needed once the quotation marks are straightened out). These tasks will help with clarity and in securing the paper's ethos."
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(Kibin, 2024)
Reference list entry:
Kibin. (2024). Pokémon comes to america: parenting in the late 1990s. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/pokmon-comes-to-america-parenting-in-the-late-1990s-8e5BgxpA
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("Pokémon Comes to America: Parenting in the Late 1990s.")
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"Pokémon Comes to America: Parenting in the Late 1990s." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/pokmon-comes-to-america-parenting-in-the-late-1990s-8e5BgxpA
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1. "Pokémon Comes to America: Parenting in the Late 1990s." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/pokmon-comes-to-america-parenting-in-the-late-1990s-8e5BgxpA.
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"Pokémon Comes to America: Parenting in the Late 1990s." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/pokmon-comes-to-america-parenting-in-the-late-1990s-8e5BgxpA.
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