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How Advancements in Technology Resulted in New Online Crimes

In this essay on cybercrime, the student zooms in on the mid- to late-1990s, noting that criminal use of technology easily outpaced official responses. The student discusses internet security, child pornography, and financial crimes. The student also discusses criminal theory as related to computers: conflict theory, social control theory, and social learning theory.
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Bridget's feedback:

"You've crafted an interesting investigation into these two topics that, when complete, will offer the reader solid insight into where and how they intersect. The second part of the discussion (criminology) cuts off before the specific applications can be explored fully, so your next step is probably going to be finishing things up. Once you've done that, you can go back and think about finetuning how your ideas are presented on the page. This ranges from the lower-order concerns of writing mechanics, appropriate word choice, and formatting your page per your style guide to higher-order concerns of argumentation, organization, and structure. Your discussion moves logically, so work with the argumentation will be within sections or paragraphs. To suggest one area of focus, the paragraph on pedophiles lacks sources, emphasizing instead pathos; in a robustly sourced essay, this will appear less rigorous and thus less persuasive.

As a final note, and if you continue work on this essay today, the sources and discussion suggest a late twentieth century focus that will need to be either updated or justified, purpose-wise, so the essay can make the argument for its relevancy; this will be especially important in an area of such rapid change."

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