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Throughout my life I have adapted to certain things that are truly unequal unfair and unjust There has always been a mountain in the way of a goal or a dream But the mountains of life arent always there to make things difficult They are there to make you fight for what you want And I feel that you have to fight to succeed this day and age My fight is on for me to go on to college I want to go to college more than anything in the world The reason it is so important to me is I would like to be the first one to graduate from college in my family I could then be a better role model for my younger siblings and for my son I could then show them that I took all of the mountains the inequalities the unfairness and the injustice and made it work for me I could show them that it is possible for poor black children to go to college With faith hard work and perseverance anything is possible Anything can be achieved once you set your mind to it and thats just what I want to let them know I think that if I can make it to college I can always find ways to aid and assist my family getting there My goal is to go on to medical school and to become a psychiatrist I have always wanted to be a doctor for as long as I can remember I enjoy working with people and I would love to heal the world one person at a time Mental illness is such a problem in our country that I feel there should be more people to work with the mind Psychiatrists psychologists and neurologists are people who are shied away from The reason is that many people are in denial that they have a problem That is the reason I want
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