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Heredity traits that I think have shaped me into the personI today come mostly from my maternal side I inherited mymothers easy-going and outgoing personalty Both of myparents are very level headed and very realistic I aminherited both of those traits also My father always wentout of his way to make people feel comfortable I inheritedsome of that trait because I like to make people feelcomfortable in awkward or new environmentsEnvironmental factors that have influenced mydevelopment as a person have shaped my outlook on life andmy beliefs I have been brought up in neighborhoods wherestrong family structure family values and morals are veryimportant The reason I want to make sure I marry someonewho I feel will I support and want to spend the rest of mylife with is because of the way I was brought up Theenvironment I was brought up in frowned on divorceI will use the same methods as my parents used to raiseme to an extent I will teach and preach the same thingsthat my parents taught me for example my parents alwayspreached the importance and the value of succeeding inacademics and in athletics They also thought me that I mustrespect myself before I can respect others this had a hugeaffect on the person I have become The things I will changein the way I raise my children are that I will try not toraise my voice at my children very often and I will use asmuch as positive reinforcement as possiblePeer pressure and criticism were emotional challengeswhich were the hardest for me to cope with throughout myadolescence Every adolescent faces peer pressure inpositive or negative ways Unfortunately most peer pressureis negative for example almost every person who smokesstarted smoking because of peer pressure Peer pressure washard for me to cope with because I hated watching my closefriends fall victims to negative peer pressure and it wasalso hard for me to be critiqued for not giving into peerpressure The strong person who
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