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Nature's Laxative: Why You Should Incorporate Fiber into Your Diet

This persuasive essay lauds the role of dietary fiber in modern diets. The student traces unhealthy components of current North American diets, as well as resulting chronic disorders and diseases, to aspirational and conspicuous consumption lifestyles.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bridget's feedback:

"You show good control over the language, and your tone and style is personable and engages the reader, who will appreciate the irony of the final sentence as well as the attention to structure in bringing the frame back, full-circle. Keep an eye on minor mechanical errors that can disrupt clarity (commas, missing words, typos); your mechanics are overall sound, so this is probably a matter of a careful proofread.

Because this essay integrates dietary advice and results of research, I strongly recommend incorporating your sources in the form of in-text citations or signal phrases. This will built up your ethos, let your reader see where the information is coming from, and also help establish the timeliness of the findings. If any assignment parameters prevent the use of in-text citations, consider a bibliography or further reading section at the end for your reader."

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