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The Deed The air is chilly and the leaves are flying around like small tornadoes clouds are darkening to a ripe grayish color and eventually it starts to rain The drops pelt the ground ceaselessly like a bombing raid and there is a thick fog all around that looms with a feeling of uneasiness and unrest Something is not right not complete not whole not finished Thunder cracks the dark sky as lighting gives it a quick scar As if created by the lighting a man appears in the fog blurry at first but clearer with every step He opens the gate and proceeds with little fear to a stone and ponders for a minute His face looks two shades purple with his left eye puffed up like a balloon and six stitches above his right Another man noticing his company sits up from his peaceful slumber He takes a seat upon the slab of rock gracefully and joyfully greets his visitor Kyle Its so good to finally see you again he says with a wide tooth ridden grin rubbing his aching head I told you I made a promise and I kept it Even though at the beginning I thought it was going to be impossible I did it I did it for you Kyle says as his eyes begin to water I quickly cleaned my room and finished all of my homework because it was game day It was my dads big match he was going to be defending his belt the middleweight title Oh no you dont mister youre not going anywhere my mom yelled What the hell do you mean Im not going anywhere Im going to see dads last match I snapped Dont you use that language young man You better watch your tongue or else its going to get another good lashing And your father is nothing but an unruly barbarian If
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