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"Your essay is heartfelt, but the conclusion essentially restates the introduction. “Catholic” should be capitalized, “wholeheartedly” is not hyphenated, and “cannot” is not two words. Single quotation marks should be used only within double quotation marks. Citations should precede a period ending a sentence. It is good practice to include a comma after the penultimate element of a list, and it is required by many formats. Avoid mixing verb tenses. For example, you write that the scrolls comprising the Masoretic text “prove” the truth of the Dead Sea scrolls, and that they “matched.” You write “hey” instead of “they.” Avoid arbitrary capitalization. You end page 1 with a comma splice, which is the use of a comma to link what should be two sentences. Your writing suffers from a number of grammatical issues. Consider running a grammar check to identify and correct them."
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(Kibin, 2024)
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Kibin. (2024). Belief in a supernatural being. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/belief-in-a-supernatural-being-plcusilD
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