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Is it dead What happened I said as I rolled my sisters hamster around in its little cage It was a Sunday evening when I said these words I was all alone and I was very confused I didnt know what I was going to do at that point The only person who I could talk to and help me out in this situation was a friend that I had been talking to for a few minutes My friend also did not know what I should do I poked the poor creature several times to see if it still had any life left in it Instead of waking up and moving about its cage the hamster lay there motionless like a little stuffed animal I sat there in the living room talking on the phone and examining the hamsters cage My little sisters hamster had died while it was under my care My parents had gone to San Fransisco for the weekend and instead of staying at my grandparents house like my parents recommended I decided to stay at home Both of my sisters went to my grandparents house so I had the whole house to myself I even had some company my sisters hamster I was the hamsters sole caretaker Without me it would starve die of thirst or somehow find a way to escape the confines of its little cage and wreak havoc throughout my parents house Because Ive never taken care of a hamster before my sister had to tell me how I was to take care of her hamster I was to feed it make sure there was plenty of water play with it and give it some exercise by putting it inside of a plastic ball and let it run around inside of it for exercise Simple or so I thought The first day went smoothly and the hamster was doing its hamster thing
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