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Its a Saturday night and the bars are packed People are inside having a few or more than a few drinks A select few are really drunk or passed out Now lets step outside and take a look at a different type of drinking drinking at an early age High school and junior high kids are at a party drinking Like the adults some are just having a few but quite a few are having more than that and are stumbling around These kids have been given the idea that drinking is something that adults do and we all know that kids cant wait to be grown up Thus they drink figuring that if they can at least do what adults do then they will be grown up in a way This is how our society works Enough with the philosophy of it Now I would like to talk about the effects that early age drinking can have on a person I grew up in a town that has the most bars per capata in the state of Montana and is in the top ten in the United States This has a huge effect on under age drinkers The bars card at the door and as long as your 18 your in And since the bouncers will stamp nearly anyone they know or like the number of kids is always high It dosnt help that Dillon is a college town and ther are many under age college kids there Now lets imagine another party where kids are drinking The bonfire is roaring Bubba just decided that singeing everyones eyebrows off by throwing some gasoline on the fire would be fun Of course nobody thought that this was very funny except for Bubba Bubba is not the only teenage person at this party who has had a few to many There are a lot of under age kids who are just plain drunk
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