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Read your note that you wrote yesterday before you went to work It was considerate of you to write Thanks I am sorry that I misunderstood what you said about your daughters ages For some reason I thought you had 5 girls and that the oldest 3 were away from home and in college I had the impression that you still had 2 younger ones living at home that were under the age of 18 and anywhere from little babies to a teenager It is sooo hard to find a good man that doesnt smoke is attractive has similar interests and is Catholic-ChristianMy daughter Jessie is interested in a young man in Phoenix My son Josh likes a girl in Texas In telling you more about my kids Jessie is a Level 3 Manager of Boys and Girls apparel at Target store here in Santa Fe She is currently enrolled in her senior year of homeshooling and holds honor roll status She would like to graduate by Fall of this year Josh on the other hand is working as a driver for a vending company and starting his own home based business which he is estatic about He attends seminars in Nevada and Albuquerque often looking forward to an upcoming one in Palm Springs Ca this summerHis business is called Quixtar which you might recognize as good ole Amway with a modern day twist I wasnt happy about my son leaving college but he didnt like it and he said that he might go back which I hope he will He had a 40 GPA can you imagine how I felt when he gave it up My daughter is thinking about attending college to become a Veterinarian but she is tired from all she does right now and knows that its a long road ahead and alot of bucks needed to pay for medical school What the 2 of them really want
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