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It was a sunny Sunday morning the spring breeze was evident all around the kind that says summer in on the way My best friend called and offered to take me rock climbing up at Indian Hills I was thrilled but timid Waiting with anticipation I could hear the sound of his car coming it was distinct in its own way because the muffler was on its last leg He arrived in style no not really The paint of his car was peeling off and the smell of the exhaust filled the air with a horrible aroma Every time I got in his car I felt embarrassed but it was all right because he was the only one who could drive As we started up the 225 Highway we were following traffic along the twisting turning road Suddenly my best friend cursed under his breath I looked at him surprisingly and asked Whats wrong He started to laugh took his foot off the accelerator hit the brakes and said Didnt you see that state trooper I nodded Well we were going 85 up this road he said Luckily we were not the only cars on the road About a mile from the turn off we slowed down to 55 miles an hour When we pulled off the side of the road we were both surprised to find that there were no other cars parked there Normally this turn off was packed with cars with people climbing in the Indian Hills Although we were both happy that there was no one else around to interfere there was a lingering feeling of dread If something were to go wrong there wouldnt be anybody else around to help We both got out of the car and decided to go on against our better judgment The trail up was steep about two feet wide surrounded with scrub brush On the way up I was thinking both about how bad
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