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The moon shoots huge columns of light across the dimly lit dorm room directly into the eyes of her and he is trying hard to get a look into them They are lying side by side on his full size bed naked and panting heads almost touching These are the warm electric minutes before sunrise in Richmond He wants her to look into his eyes too to stare right back at him but her eyes glaze over him as if shes looking through him An illegal air conditioner keeps the two cool in an attic single in Atlantic House Soyoure not going to talk to me He asks Mmmmnope She giggles Fine then Im stealing my pillow back Oh no youre not the girl says youre going to have to fight for it Oh God he says Now youve asked for it They both fumble around in bed trying to knock each other off both laughing and panting I win She jubilantly exclaims Yeahhave your pillow I have my blanket He says as he pulls the blanket away from her and continues to stare at her eyes You dont look too good he says You have a bruise on your chin Im fine It takes five minutes for him to say Why are things different between us Why cant we go back to beingyou know He lets go of the blanket and rubs his eyes For Christs sake she says irritably You are such an asshole She rolls over and stares across the room I knew I shouldnt have come here I was wrong What can I say You know it wont happen again He strokes the back of her head but she doesnt turn Do you still want me He asks You dont have to answer meI guess He says sounding confused and hopeful She turns around and looks him in the eyes and says Theres no use No I dont She gets out
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