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Behind me I could here the heavy steps of my pursuer ahead of me lay a blanket of darkness My legs shook and my head ached I didnt know what was behind me but every time I took a breath I heard the footsteps moving closer and closer to me Suddenly someone grabbed me by the shoulder The tough hand scratched my back The pursuer dragged me as if I were a criminal I did not know where I was but the pursuer pushed me against a cold jagged wall Then the person spoke to me in a low and crude voice He wanted all the money I had or he would keep me hostage My pockets were empty When he checked my pockets and found out that I had no money still in darkness he pulled me to my feet clinging viciously to my arm and dragging me along with him I had no idea where the man was taking me I was shivering exhausted and petrified He took me to a brighter room and told me I was a hostage from that point onward Numb with terror I could not speak move or even hum He threatened me by pointing his gun at me so I thought it was wise not to aggravate the man In the dim light I could just make out his face He had dark hair was about one hundred and eighty centimeters tall wearing brunette boots and a dark shirt I spent what felt like an hour waiting for someone to rescue me then suddenly the door swung open and for a second I thought it was the police but unfortunately it was the man Hed brought me some food to eat He brought some ill-smelling cookies and shoved them into my mouth Then the man called someone on the telephone and referred by name to my parents He told them that he needed one million dollars and
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