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The clouds had moved in earlier that evening It was very gloomy weather but it wasnt raining yet Rick and Jodie let their fifteen-year-old daughter go to a party that night She had a curfew but she was lateagain They were sitting at the kitchen table having a discussion and waiting for the instant she walked through the door Damn her she knows that her curfew was at midnight and its already three this is the last time she goes to a party he said as he stood up and walked around the kitchenNo buts shes done this one too many times Give her one more chance Jodie pleaded following him as he paced back and forth No You give her an arm and she takes an arm and a legIf we keep letting her do this she will Look Rick well ground her for a week shell learn her lessonJodie weve gone through this before and look where is she now He said as he looked through the window We never disciplined her we need to get tougher what she need is a good ass beating like your father gave youDont you dare touch her She warnedShe needs to learn her lesson she needs to know that she isnt going to make a fool of meSo you think abuse is going to help Asked Jodie Well well never know until we tryYoull go to jail you know shell call the police and youll go to jail are you willing to risk thatJodie was asking Rick as the lights came up the drivewayThere she is just wait just wait till she walks through the door Said Rick as he was taking off his belt like a horsewhipRick please Loud knocks at the doorThey paused they look at each other with the most bewildered faces and then they proceed to open the doorAre you the parents ofJanelle Marquez Unwillingly asked the police officerYes whathappened Asked Rick
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