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My first date with Candy is a good illustration of the kind of women attracted to me For my part I felt I owed it to myself to pursue her as she was a model and on a scale of ten was a 9 in my ranking However all the qualities that made up her beauty came at the expense of her intelligence and would fully justify all the things related about blondes were she not a red-head Anyway we went to the Polish community centre as it sold alcohol at the cheapest rate in the North end There I was met by some unkempt gentleman who appeared to have been hastily assembled in some dingy laboratory He appeared to be at least 6half feet tall with a scraggly beard and a T-shirt with holes and tears throughout Hey he called out to me as soon as I met his line of vision dont I know you We got into a fight didnt we Despite my protests he would have none of it Sure we did You delivered pizza to my house once It was difficult to arm myself against such logic so I waited impatiently for Candy to help me out Listen you touch my sister you die With that he lurked off for another drink After 5 minutes recovering from this I was met by another who loked the antithesis of the former but who I learned was the brother His name was Mike and he had a shot of black hair gelled back that suited his suit We shook hands and I was relieved to meet a normal person He was with his girlfriend and suggested we all go off to a cafe for drinks and a bite to eat Around a quiet little table we sat with George glaring politely at me the whole time Mike put his arm around me Listen its not my fault I was born into the
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