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I never went to a single formal dance untill my senior year On nights when there was awinter formal or a junior prom my friends would get all dress up and ready to dance intheir beautiful gowns While they were dancing with their dates I was at home watchingTV Its not that I had trouble finding a date of my own but just the thought of gettingdressed up and dancing in a dress didnt interest me One day a week before Mira Mesassenior prom I decided to go It was after all my last year in high school and at leastwanted to experience one formal dance I was rushed to find a date and dress in suchshort notice Thankfully for friends and my mom I was able to find everything I neededI thought looking for a prom date last minute would be my hardest task but itwasnt My friend Judy found me a date with her friend name Mike which is now myboyfriend because of prom Like me he too was looking for a prom date So there Iwas I had a date but no dress So my mom and I went on a shopping trip to Plaza BonitaMall We found this store that sold really beautiful gowns for a very cheap price I think Itried on every single dress in the store and each dress made me feel like a princess Icouldnt decided on which dress I wanted I wanted to take all of them home So finally Ichoose a white and lavender dress It looked like one of those dresses that Cinderellawould wear to her ball With the dress picked I moved on to accessories With just threemore days till prom I started to stress out I was worried that I wouldnt have all that Ineeded before prom I havent bought my shoes and I havent made any appointments formy hair and nails I called all most every single salon but they were
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