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There are some people out there who are genuinely great people Sometimes it is easier for me to pick out the negative in others It was impossible for me to do that when I met Brendon John Collins He was beaming with beautiful qualities After a few days I came to adore just how silly loving and ambitious he isFor a grown man Brendon is the silliest I have ever met My co-workers would crack up when they found the all too familiar post-it notes Brendon left laying around Scribbled on them were Pumpkin pooter puss nutmeg spice or other words he made up I never know what is going to come next when he walks into a room with his mischievous smirk Sometimes he will just screech pumpkin bear in a high pitched voice My audience favorite is the raptor Tilting his head he runs toward you with his toes pointed outward His tongue slipping in and out of his mouth like the large reptile is his potraying His eyes bulge He screams in his best dinosaur voice As he gets closer he points and bends his index and middle fingers His arms and hands hanging like hooks he pretends to slash whatever is in front of him Everyone who has had the pleasure of seeing the raptor always requests it He never fails to make me laugh The most significant thing about my boyfriend is how loving he is He goes out of his way to make everyone around him feel entirely loved Animals love Brendon Sophia his cat had her kittens on his lap She obviously felt extremely comfortable with him Volunteering for the Spaniel rescue he took care of many dogs If their teeth were in poor condition he would make sure their teeth got brushed He would be very gentle with dogs that were shy Loving each one of them just the way the needed to be Brendon has always
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