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Denise is a very attractive girl with her head screwed on straight She has a 40 grade point average at Spelman College She comes from a very good and wholesome family who went to church every Sunday and sometimes on Wednesday for bible study Denise was a nice girl who always had a kind word to say about everyone She was the type that most say are nieve but I say she is just very impressionable Denise not only excelled in the classroom but she excelled on the track as well She was an all-state award winner in New Jersey on the track in the 100-meter and 200 meter dashes Denise also published in Whose Who of High School students in the year of 1998 She was an all around great person and it was a joy to be around her She was one of those people in this world in which if she put her hands on it it would turn to platinum Denise has plans on becoming an orthopedic surgeon and every medical school in the country wants her She is only in her junior year at Spelman has already been accepted to the school of her choice provided she gets a 40 in Organic Chemistry She has already done very well on her MCAT test Denises only flaw would have to be she was so focused on everything else and helping other people that she had no time for a love life She has not had a steady boyfriend in her life since 1998 Even though she is happy with all of her success and accomplishments in her twenty years on this earth she still would like to find that handsome articulate grade A man to spend her life with She hopes that she will find him real soon for she is getting quite lonely Both of her best friends have boyfriends in which she is responsible for setting the two up
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