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Slowly I rowed my canoe toward Hide Away Island my island The oars glided gentlyover the water making ripples If you had been standing on the shore looking at the sceneIm sure you would have found it very picturesque The setting sun was reflected by thewater and over head birds flew I didnt take the time to enjoy the beauty thoughbecause I know with each stroke of the oars I got closer to my refugeThe minute my canoe scraped the sandy ground I let out and tied it securely to abranch Grabbing my pack I began my trek to my fort I first built the fort when I wasten all by myself but the fort was really Chads ideaChad was my big brother Hes the one who really discovered Hide Away Islandbut he shared it with me It was our secret mom and dad never knew about it They stilldont know Of course they never did bother much with us theyre always too busyVacations here at Lake Everclear were suppose to bring us together but it seemslike they just make mom and dad fight more Chad use to take me to Hide Away Islandso we could get away from them Now I go aloneAs I approach the fort a sense of relief sweeps over me I set down my gear andWant some help a voice said startling me I looked up and saw a boy about myage standing there Sorry if I scared you he apologizedYou didnt and no I dont want help I said getting back to my workYeah I Gus I didnt scare you he said not going away After all you need tobe really brave to spend the night here on Beelzebub Island he said as I rolled out myIts Hide Away Island not Beelzebub Island I correctedNo its real name is Beelzebub Island Its a pretty interesting story if you wantto hear it he said and continued without waiting for my
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