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Five years ago I graduated from high school I felt like I was finally free of the rules that parents enforced while I was in school Example of my parents rules are no playing till after homework is done and curfew on school nights After all I just finished twelve years of school and deserved some reward My parents had different views about the changes of rules after school High school was over and my parents still were enforcing rules that I thought only apply while I was in schoolThe day of graduation I walked across the stage and received my diploma I was walking to my car thinking to my self I graduated high school About that time my friend stopped to tell me about a party later that night at the head cheerleader house The party would start around 800 pm and everybody was invited I was trilled to hear it and looking forward to staying out all-night No school to go to the next day there would be any reason I could not When I got home I told my parents about the party I taught I was going to stay there for the whole night When I pulled up to the house the place was packed with the graduating class I talked to people about the things we had done in school I talked to my close friends about their plans after high school This was not a regular party but more of a celebration that school was over I danced most of the night and talked the other half of the night I was having a great time when I got a page on my pager It was my parents calling me I called home to see what they wanted and my answered the phone I said What can I do for you my mom said It was 130 in the morning and I had to be home What was
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