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It was a hot humid Hawaiian night and we could see the lights shining along the beach at the Turtle Bay Hilton Though we could not hear the sound of the waves crashing we saw the the white shadow of the waves as they broke This beautiful sight just hurt the moral of my team and my job that much harder When I joined the Army I never thought Hawaii would be a hard place to work Apparently I was in for a journey that would seem like an eternity We were on a 32hour mission with very little sleep my team was leading our company in our mission We had an idea where our enemy was and our job was to seek and destroy This was not a real war battle yet it was a training mission taken as if it were a real war battle With little sleep and the beautiful sight of the beach I had to ensure that my team was ready for battle As point man and team leader I had a lot of things going through my mind I had to not only guide 90 people into battle but also ensure that my team was focused and ready to fight After every two miles I would stop and give everyone a five minute rest at this time I would ensure my squad and platoon leader that I stopped only to conduct a map check I was a strict but sincere leader I understood that to function at least 80 percent our bodies needed some rest We had 60 pounds on our back a kevlar on our head that we thought was needed just make us heat casualties and were walking through the jungleWe were only four miles away from our enemy and as we began to begin our foot march again I started a head count tapping the members of my team on their head quietly This was something
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