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My Ideal Mate Momma always told me to be careful of whom I loved My daddy always told me to make sure hes right I learned through the method of life that I have to set my own standard of rules for relationships but since I am my parents child my rules have a little splash of them in them Sixteen Finally Im going on my first date I had wanted so long and hard for that day that I could have tasted it and finally it came I was supposed to go see a movie with my boyfriend of eight months I was faced with several dilemmas --what to wear --how to do my hair -- what movie to see -- what time --how will we get there -- will my mother embarrass me All of the contemplation led to my first rule I have to have a boyfriend with a car Three months later I thought I had it all My boyfriend of now eleven months got a car for his seventeenth birthday We were in the wind never to be found Only one problem arose where to go One particular day he and I went to the park for a picnic Just the two of us alone together or at least I thought Some where in between the last course and the first kiss of the evening the town junior soccer league decided to go for a long goal right in the middle of our potato salad My second rule then came about as I wiped potato chunks from my forehead I must have a man with an apartment well at least when I get old enough anyway Soon after I developed a taste for older men By the next summer I had a new boyfriend in his early twenties He had a car a job and his own apartment You couldnt tell me anything
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