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Rolling waves gently brushed upon the sand and nipped softly at my toes I gazed out into the oblivion of blue hue that lay before me I stared hopefully at sun-filled sky but I couldnt help but wonder how I was going to get through the day Honestly I never thought in a million years that my daughter and I would be homeless Oh how I yearned for our house in the suburbs A pain wrenched at my heart when I was once reminded again of my beloved husband Peter I missed him so much and couldnt help but ask God why he was taken from us Living underneath Pier 14 was no life for Emily and me I had to get us out of here and back on our feet My stomach moaned angrily I needed to somehow find food for us but how Suddenly something slimy brushed up against my leg and pierced my thoughts I jumped back and brushed the residue of sand of my legs What was that As my eyes skimmed the water in front of me I noticed something spinning in the foam of the waves Curiosity got the best of me and I went over to take a closer look The object danced in the waves and eventually was coughed out onto the beach Emily I called to my eight-year-old daughter who was at that time infatuated with a seashell that she found earlier that day Come here and see this Mommy found something Although I had no idea what that something was and I definitely didnt know it would change my life foreverWhat did you find Mommy Is it food Emily came running down from the pier to see my finding Oh honey I answered sadly acknowledging my daughters hunger I wish it was Actually Im not quite sure what it is Help me clean it off will you Emily and I began scrubbing the dilapidated seaweed
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