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The September air was cool and crisp ass all the schools and colleges were justopening Jeff Koback a college sophmore was anxious to bein college After his lengthythree month summer break The only thing he couldnt stand was the workload becausehe was lucky because last your he almost didnt pass This year the only thing he wants isa computer because it would make life so much easierJeff began his first weekend since returning to college by waking up early aroundnine oclock in the morning took a shower brushed his teeth got dressed and drove to theAt the bank he walked to the teller and asked Can I cash thisThe teller responded Yes you can may I see your idenification she read hisdrivers liscense andJeff cashed his paycheckJeff walked out of the bank as he tucked his money into his wallet he jumped intohis car and drove home Twenty minutes later he parked his car and walked into the doorHey Jeff Jeffs dad said as Jeff closed the door Want some breakfastJeff went to the oven and took his pancakes and bacon and sat down with his dadto read the paper They read the paper for twenty minutes as Jeffs dad asked Hey Jeffread this ad he passed the ad to him and Jeff read through it as his dad explainedBrand new computer really powerful and what you would like really cheap heJeffs dad pointed to the bottom of the ad where it said 250 one day onlyJeff asked Dad can I borrow some money I only got like 150 from myJeffs dad replied I cant I just paid my insurance bill I would if I could Hethought to himself and then said I think you should ask your mom and see whatJeff pulled out his chair and said Alright and began looking for his mom Hestarted in her room and finally found her in the basement He saw her and the first thinghe asked was
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