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There I was driving southbound on Hoover Rd in the brown 1974 Ford Grand Torrio Elite my parents had bought me for my last birthday I had only had this gigantic steel car for about ten months I was in love with every inch of the car from its tan mint condition interior to its flawless dark brown glossy body Usually when I would drive it would seem as if I were in heaven just floating along down the road Today however was different something didnt seem right about the foggy environment around me It was as if I couldnt control my actions or feelings I had no sense of taste touch and barely any sight and for some reason it was 730 in the morning but black as midnight outside For some reason I could feel that something bad was going to happen I knew I was running late for my dreaded Calculus class at the high school so I sped up a little Every few hundred yards or so I would speed up until I was racing down the long stretch or asphalt at about seventy miles per hour All of the sudden a huge black dog darted out in front of me I slammed on the brakes snatched the wheel and tried to avoid the helpless dog It was too late I clipped the dog in the rear sending me into a uncontrollable tailspin into the ditch where my car landed upside down That was the last of my wonderful car Well so I thought it wasKris wake up Youre going to be late shouted my preachful mother I abruptly dove out of bed as if it was on fire and I was something very flammable Whew I thought what a terrible dream I threw my clothes on and was out of the house faster that my mom could even ask me if I wanted breakfast I jumped into the car remembering
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